What Really Hurt Korra Pt. 4 What Should be added by Koimonsters-khaos, literature
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What Really Hurt Korra Pt. 4 What Should be added
I didn't expect to be writing this many parts to this series. ^^; I will link the first 3 parts in the comments below. I have made several suggestions on what should be cut from the plot entirely, but here's what could be added to prop up the series more. Have the moon cycle play a role in season one's plot Given Amon turned out to be a self hating water-bender, have the moon cycle play a bigger role. There are rare events in the moon cycle outside of just an eclipse: https://spaceplace.nasa.gov/full-moons/en/#:~:text=There%20are%20a%20few%20different,Moon's%20many%20phases%20and%20types. Have it so Amon has control over Republic City longer, have Korra and Mako find out Amon's secret and realize he plans to use one of the rare moon cycles in his final blow. This would add needed tension and remind the audience of the bigger world of the avatar world. Make Dreams Much More Important To The Plot Dreams were shown to be important in Avatar, but played a minor role. Dreams in the
What Really Hurt Korra Pt.3 Re-Cut Needed by Koimonsters-khaos, journal
What Really Hurt Korra Pt.3 Re-Cut Needed
I recommend reading my first two essays before this one I don't think the over all plot of Korra was bad, the execution really needed a lot of work, however most can be fixed with small changes. Mainly re-dubs should do the trick, mainly in the revised version of "Spirit of the competition" Tarrlok, Amon and Beifong could get into spates on the radio, cutting down on the animation budget. Given what is going on right now, the voice actors don't even need to be brought into the recording studio. Avatar: the last bender had some of the child actors record their lines at home in some cases given they had to go to school still. Small animation changes Most of the action scenes were done well just like in Avatar, but some non-action scenes really need fixing. The scene were the air bender family first sees the bunny dragon fly spirits was the worst animation in the whole franchise, it looked like someone glued pictures of them onto Popsicle sticks and waved them around on a
